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Loss

Missing image
Mutual comfort
searches sorrow's embrace,
as ice firmly clasps
our life's most bitter tragedy.

Family of three
in a world of wintry splendour,
future's promise shone
like fiery sunsets.

The essence of one
now expired,
leaves merely an infinity
of grief to explore.


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AliceinPoetryLand
30-60 words
Picture found at Google Images
Artist Unknown

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  • spiritualangel
    December 3, 2008
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    Beautiful. Well done. Best of Luck.


  • SimplyNoodle
    November 22, 2008

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    wonderful picture and poem! so sad to think of a polar bear dieing..


  • Desire gold member
    November 19, 2008

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    Dangggggggg~

    Holy Moly this swells the eyes and so sad to envision
    Polar Bears are near also dear to my Heart~
    and just to imagine one loss is terible
    Wonderful take on the picture~
    Woot!!
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes in the contest too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • LilEmoPrincess
    November 19, 2008

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    Lovely poem and what a great pictuer to be inspierd by! good luck in the contest i hope you go far.


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    November 19, 2008

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    This reminds me of the tragedy unfolding in NSW with the poor family who drowned. The sadness of this piece is just so raw and heartbreaking, as cute as the picture is, your words turned it for me into tears. Best to you in the contest

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