When a teardrop falls into an ocean it still creates waves.
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I hope you remembered to complete the exam as well 
A contest entry
- 1/3 Round Contest by Hello...No.One.Home.
400 points, ended December 3, 2008, 44 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A beautiful image you have created...
A wonderful line and I wish you all the best in the contest.
Kate
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This makes me think of the butterfly effect. Nobody wants to be just dust in the wind! I like the imgaery, its good.
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This is a wonderful one liner. I love the imagery as well as the truth in your words. Its a shame though, that we often don't realize this until it's in the past. Good luck...
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this has some beauty to it. I like it a lot. almost like one teardrop can also build rage. or i could take it that someone else becomes enraged...almost like a daughter crying and the father gets mad at whoever caused his little girl to cry. I like this...i can take it a few ways
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Wow, so true and well thought out.
This is something to remember throughout
life. Well done and good luck to you here!
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Beautiful thought. Great write, best of luck to you
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when i read this i was like awwwww..
so True....
and very meaningful too
good luck i really like this one
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Awww nicely written ^^
Good piece of wisdom there
I'm sure she'll love it (And I'm sure she completed her exam too XD)
Good luck with your entry!!
Claire x
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