Your mind is an array of falling blocks
Author notes
I am 'Swintha'...i was trying to look for a good metaphor! enjoy.
A contest entry
- 1/3 Round Contest by Never.Give.Up.
400 points, ended December 3, 2008, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I'm still thinking about this, it seemed so simple at first but when you think about it... its not..
Odd...
A wonderful line and I wish you all the best in the contest.
Kate -
This is engaging and very creative.
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this is good...but do they put them together? hmmm ... great metaphor!
good luck
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This is pretty creative!
Nice work here and good luck
with this entry.
Jeremy0826 -
Ooo I think this is a pretty interesting metaphor
I quite like it ^^
I wants to steal
Only kidding 
Good luck with your entry!
Claire x
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