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I am...

I am everything and nothing.
I am the light and the dark.
I am a sad song on a rainy day,
and a sea breeze on a summers eve.

I am infinity plus one.
I am the good and the bad.
I am the slow dance at a wedding.
I am a hug before parting,
and a wave goodbye.

I am velvet covered steel,
I am solitude and sanctity.
I am a stone, unmoving and unchanging.
I am love, life, and laughter.

I am a first kiss in the summer rain.
I am a broken heart.
I am wrath.
I am forgiveness.

I am nothing without you.

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  • Astonishing! This is just beautiful. I love the way you started each line with I am! Excellent work on this poem. The ending is just so fitting. Great work. Kahy


  • Infinite Butterfly
    November 24, 2008
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    Wow. Amazing!


  • The FaeQueen
    November 19, 2008

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    Lovely!

    I love the rhythmic flow of the poem, musical infact!
    "I am a first kiss in the summer rain.
    I am a broken heart.
    I am wrath.
    I am forgiveness" Those are my favourite lines! So creative