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Fucking Nonsense !

Have you ever fucked in the rain ?
Have you ever fucked with pain ?
Would you fuck like that again ?
Is that fucking memory still stored in your brain ?



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  • eyelids shut
    December 16, 2008
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    Fuck you too!


  • FreedomPeaceTree
    December 4, 2008
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    dr.sues???? lol jk good write

  • xxxdeathangelxxx
    November 19, 2008
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    i always will babe. i always will

  • xxxdeathangelxxx
    November 19, 2008
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    im always here to talk. you know where i am


    • Shuberth
      November 19, 2008
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      thanks babe for being there and showing some love


  • Unforgiveable
    November 19, 2008
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    Nice!

    This is freaking awesome and fuck you too!


  • xxBlack Dawnxx
    November 19, 2008

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    in what do you meen by the word fucked (sex or as in being hurt) eather way nice write, and chear up friend you seem stressed x

    • Shuberth
      November 19, 2008
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      i meant sex !

      Terry i havent heard from u for a while i hope ur doing ok...
      thanks for reading and for the comment

      • xxBlack Dawnxx
        November 19, 2008
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        ''giggling''
        ah now i get it
        im not doing to bad just due to go into labour any time now so im pretty tired, how are you?


  • The FaeQueen
    November 19, 2008

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    Went back to your poem again , reread it and came up with the same conclusion!
    you sound very angry. the thing that makes me say this is that i like to read emotions in a poem.
    So, are you?

    • Shuberth
      November 19, 2008
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      Yes I am angry! I’m broken! and this is the result of disappointment, I’ve been good before but what I got in return ? Is pain ! so I thought I have to change against my wish … instead of being good it's time to be rude !

      Thank u so much for reading and taking ur time to comment


  • The FaeQueen
    November 19, 2008
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    Ummmmm.....!
    Wellllll....!
    I am really not sure what to say!

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