Naked she does come to me,
a treasure from beyond
I part the seas with open hands,
to show her: I respond
Enticing her to take a dip,
to feel my soothing waters touch
My salt will give her ecstasy,
the type she craves so much
I will nibble at her body,
with each wave that she doe’s crest
Stroking gently on her nipples firm,
of that I do attest
As she reaches the boiling point,
I will caress her subtle curves
And help her calmly stroke her way,
to what she most deserves
Come to me my beautiful,
let me free you to your soul
My ripples rinse your dusky dew,
until you lose control
The castle that you see afar,
was never really there
Just a trick to get you to come in,
and wash your derrière
Author notes
The artist is : Jim Warren
Title of painting: The Calling
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired Poems by ennovy.
700 points, ended November 21, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Cute ending!
The sea as the voyeuristic lover is a wonderful take. Your humor comes out in tidal play. Well done!
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what a twist at the end of the poem...some nice rhyme also...Thank you for entering...Novy & Brazos
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