In the path of fornication
Temptation leads,
Blinding the eyes with temporary pleasures
While casting the truth in the darkness
Many have fallen short not realizing
Many have made mistakes that time can not erase,
Many with everlasting scars upon the their souls
Many blaming the devil for their own action
Though some turn to god for repentance
Some embrace their evils ways with hypocrisy
Punishing their offspring for the mistakes they’ve done.
Many have failed to learn from their mistakes
Many don’t seem to have other choices
For only the sin of the flesh
Will provide money for a feed
In the world full of diseases
Many forget the consequences
Many stub them selves with aids
And disease that’s can not heal
Though disappointing to see
Some groom to bring temptation their way
Forgetting the pain and embarrassment,
Without notice they have submit and
Dedicate their bodies to the sins of the flesh.
A contest entry
- Adultery In Rhyme by piccola.
700 points, ended December 12, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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very good! and truthfull


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thanks very much for the comment i really appreciate it.
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