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Sins of the flesh



In the path of fornication
Temptation leads,
Blinding the eyes with temporary pleasures
While casting the truth in the darkness

Many have fallen short not realizing
Many have made mistakes that time can not erase,
Many with everlasting scars upon the their souls
Many blaming the devil for their own action

Though some turn to god for repentance
Some embrace their evils ways with hypocrisy
Punishing their offspring for the mistakes they’ve done.

Many have failed to learn from their mistakes
Many don’t seem to have other choices
For only the sin of the flesh
Will provide money for a feed

In the world full of diseases
Many forget the consequences
Many stub them selves with aids
And disease that’s can not heal

Though disappointing to see
Some groom to bring temptation their way
Forgetting the pain and embarrassment,
Without notice they have submit and
Dedicate their bodies to the sins of the flesh.


                                                             




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  • FaerieNWonderland
    November 19, 2008
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    very good! and truthfull


    • Abner
      November 21, 2008
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      thanks very much for the comment i really appreciate it.