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Attempt

What can I say,
To make the pain go away
Not tell you how I feel
To make this unreal.
To feign being numb
To play the dumb
To make you hate
For healings sake.
But the venom is spreading:
A cold, hard bedding
For our relationship to sit
As our words and meetings quit.
What can I say?
Before this tear goes away
There will be anger and pain:
In death, Life is attained.

Author notes

third to last line:the word is tear as in a rip NOT tear as in to cry

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  • Whitefaeryofdeath
    November 20, 2008
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    I don't know what this is about, but I do know that I want you to be happy.