Nightfall entertains
silence
eyes weary,
skin cold,
society
fades away...
Restless mind projects
thoughts of where you are
at this very moment
as I am found staring desperately
into a rerun world
of black and white.
Author notes
Option #1
http://brightii.deviantart.com/art/The-Silence-She-Whispers-103736546
A contest entry
- Quickie Anyone?? by Sweet Impatience.
750 points, ended November 18, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Awww, i'm surprised this didn't take a placing!!
a very good write in my opinion
Well done ^^
Claire x
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Thanks Clare...I really appreciate the thought...guess it's as I wrote in 'Less Than Perfect'...oh well, better luck next time!
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very nice write. i often find myself awake most nights so i can relate. good luck with the contest
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WOW! I really really love this poem that you've written. You did a fantastic job with the prompt. I can't find just one part that I like the best, because I love the entire piece. the imagery within this write is excellent. Your take on the prompt is brilliant.
good luck
kat
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Thanks Kat! I was fortunate to stumble upon your contest & fill your last spot...it was madness trying to spit this one out! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
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"A re-run world" is seems just like that at times.. for their is indeed nothing new under the sun!
Nice!
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Awesome! I love your interpretation
of this one. Good luck and I hope that
you do well in this contest! Take care!
Jeremy0826
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Thanks Jeremy! I appreciate you taking the time in return!
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Excellent
Such a great creation for the prompt. So very well done. best of luck in the contest.
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Thanks so much for your kind return, and best to you as well!
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I really like the slant you took... this is a surprisingly orginal view of the image and your words bring illumination to the darkness it holds. Well done and best of luck.
Ken
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Thanks Ken! I really appreciate all your kind words towards this piece.
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