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Humpty Dumpty Reformed

Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall
his baby sitter wasn't watching at all!
He got hit by a hard basketball.
At the last moment, I heard Humpty call,
"Go get my mother!  She's off to the Mall!"

Hey, diddle diddle!
The cat and the fiddle!
The sitter jumped over the moon.
The little babe laughed
to see such a sight
and said, "I won't see you soon!"

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  • I.am.the.sun.
    January 14
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    hahahaha i loved it! much better than the orriginal


  • PinkPony
    November 21, 2008

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    How did you know that I love Mother Goose take-offs? I really enjoyed seeing this poem taking place in my mind.


  • Emerald Lass
    November 19, 2008

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    Can'[t resist any poem about Humpty Dumpty. You did well in this baby sitter poem. Fun to read!


  • Periwinkle Blue
    November 19, 2008

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    CUTE! I like your rhyming. It's fun to play with Mother Goose and you did it just fine here. lol


  • Melodies
    November 18, 2008

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    Grinning...

    What an adorable take on old nursery rhymes! I love what you did to dress them up with the poor baby sitter getting sent to outer space and such. Way cool!

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