hush no tears
don't cry for me.
do not fear,
do not cringe.
I am all you
and you of me.
You're not crazy
not one bit.
Don't let them tell
you that you are.
You're fine,
just keep me safe
and keep me hidden.
You'll be okay
as long as
you
listen
to
me.
Author notes
I chose option one:: http://brightii.deviantart.com/art/The-Silence-She-Whispers-103736546
I based it on schizophrenia (and ohmygosh I spelled it right!!)
54 words ^^
A contest entry
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Comments
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I completely understand about not being able to spell that word right. I always mess it up, that's probably why spell check is my best friend
.. I love your take on the prompt.. I really liked the ending.
good luck
kat
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Like how this was like the voice of the 'other' person inside the head. Nicely done.
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Aw, I like this one a lot.
Best of luck in the contest
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Thanksies
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Very well done, I love how you ended it.
It's all good as long as you listen to me...
The way they feel the world is to be trusted, by the words they hear. Good luck to you
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Thank you
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The voice of the "other"... a wonderfully nuerotic take on the image... Well done and best of luck.
Ken
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