An inviting nakedness
to feel tongue's heat,
kisses, sucking, licking,
like a child, as a man,
to see you shiver
at a slow pace for pubis,
whispering into silence
to trespass your secret,
to get drunk with moisture scents,
to quench thirst with your nectar,
penetration with saliva force,
back and forth,
top down
between spasms of
dumb joy moans.
Author notes
~spiritualangel~
Prompt: OPTION 1
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Comments
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Well heck, this is a fascinating take on the prompt.. how'd you get that? lol.
Passionate indeed
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Whoa!
With this kind of write, who needs to read the whole damn novel!?! Good job on such a compact erotic piece! -
Very well done!
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LOL - Wickedly erotic... I love your choice of words that bring such passionate images to life... Excellent write... sure to please.
Ken
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