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[ After every thing we've gone thru ]

After every thing we've gone thru
We're still best friends
After all the lies and mistakes
We've been able to make amends

I don't need to ask what's wrong
and neither does she
because some how we both know
what ever the problem may be

She never makes me feel dumb
nor does she put me down
I can just be myself
When ever she is around

I love her with all my heart
I know she loves me too
I only have one other best friend
and there's still alota room

My best friend's name is Molly
I will aways hold her dear
I just wish I saw her all the time
Cause I'm happy when she's near

Author notes

this is to my best friend molly and I kinda mentioned Nathan my other best friend... yeah I hope you like

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  • XxForeverFaithfulxX
    November 25, 2008
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    awwww Molly would love this!! awesome write sis!

    Love,
    ~Kayla


  • SoldiersRain
    November 23, 2008

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    Haha, this is really good And don't worry I'm not laughing at the poem just the an - "i kinda mentioned nathan my other best friend..." lol. He's apreciated eh? XD In any case, great write.


  • xXGoddessofPainXx
    November 20, 2008

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    This is a lovely poem very nice words.. I especially like this part,

    "I don't need to ask what's wrong
    and neither does she
    because some how we both know
    what ever the problem may be"

    Very interesting write, full of love for your friends..


  • Erica-and-Twitch
    November 19, 2008
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    good

    are you talking about me???


    • irdefk
      November 19, 2008
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      actually it's about Molly, but your my biffles too!


  • Zacharys Vengance
    November 19, 2008
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    soooo who are you talking about ?


    • irdefk
      November 19, 2008
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      Molly Beasley.. she's friends with Serena too.


  • Toxic Stardust
    November 19, 2008
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    aww...

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