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Thoughts

I was pissed
I shouldn't have been
And I know I was wrong

But I'm afraid to go say I'm sorry
Cuz I don't know if she'll believe me
And I don't know whether or not she's crying

I pray to God she's not
Cuz it breaks my heart
When I make her cry

Author notes

I fucked up. Again.

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  • Beauty Of Silence
    November 24, 2008

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    hahahas. okay, i thought you were commenting on yourself lol anyhoo... this poem is really sad. and your last line was so touching. keep penning

  • Lord Bob
    November 20, 2008
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    i just realized that you were signed in. so it looks like you are talking to urself......damn...... its vada in case you were wondering lol sorry

  • Lord Bob
    November 20, 2008
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    wonderful

    you make me cry sometimes but i still love you. ur not perfect and i cannot expect you to be. ive made you cry. but the point is that you didnt do it on purpose. i love you so much. please dont ever be afraid to talk to me.