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Typos.

Evidently you n/e/e/d/e/d it, that's what you say...
Vague recollections [I have] of your pain-
Everyone loses a fight now and then...
Recollect the energy to start [the fight] again!
Yelling {mentally} at yourself will -not- help you...
Only ||support|| your theory of there being nothing one can do.
Never give in my friend, it's a [fight] you can still win-
Even ^failures^ have been known to take it on the chin.

Have faith in You, like [I] do,
And you will start to (heal...)
Still, permit you s p a c e to have the *grace* to allow yourself to feel.

[{All I am is here...}]

Think about it, It's OK.
Yet many m/i/s/t/a/k/e/s have been made _b_e_f_o_r_e_-
Pull all of your [pride] into the fray,
Obey your ego, and  >close< the door.

    ('Cause no matter what you do,
      I believe in you...)

Author notes

It's a response to something someone told me, however it's also for anyone fighting against something bigger than themselves. If you've had a set back, carry on that path, believe in yourself. And I'll believe in you.

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  • xxvampyregirlxx
    December 17, 2008
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    awww cute!


  • Katherine Holden
    November 23, 2008
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    aww that's cute


  • upperworld06
    November 20, 2008

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    ya i see it lol.
    Have faith in You, like [I] do,
    And you will start to (heal...)
    Still, permit you s p a c e to have the *grace* to allow yourself to feel
    love that verse. good job and good luck


  • VanGoghNights
    November 19, 2008

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    interesting

    the title caught my eye and the first line pulled me in.
    I love everything about this.
    very nice
    Savina


  • Mariana gold member
    November 19, 2008

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    WOW!

    This is amazing. I absolutely love it. Well done. You have crafted something beautiful...not just with words...but using grammar too. Very Impressive
    Mariana


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    November 19, 2008

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    who among us is perfect,
    we never give up, accept and it will be given,
    true faith comes when you least expect it so always continue on and always always believe.
    grace comes through when we are open to it.
    lovely write my young friend
    God bless you always...
    's


  • Imperfect Beauty
    November 19, 2008
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    Yeah I see it! thanks. you really are a little angel aren't you! looking out for one and all


  • Denerica
    November 19, 2008

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    Amen

    Just as Typos are representing nothing can come out perfect, all we can do is try, permit your space to have the grace to heal...loved that,but the whole write is poignant...Blessings sister.


  • Sushi Darville
    November 18, 2008

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    That was pretty darn epic. Gives off hope like a fire gives heat. I loved reading this.

    I think it needs a better title though. "Typos" isn't quite the right word.


    • Walking Oxymoron gold member
      November 19, 2008
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      Hi, thank You for your comment... can you think of a better title??
      (Because I'm usuallly pretty bad with stuff like that...)

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