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and it's funny..
i've been waiting for months for our eyes to meet.
so he knows i'm okay.
and when they did tonight,
it felt like i stuck my finger in the electric socket.
i broke our gaze so quick, and turned to the boy beside me.
the boy who would always be my friend,
and i'd never want nothing more.
and i scooted closer to him.
the boy beside me was my peer, a true friend;
the boy behind the counter was.. indescribable.
and when we left, i thought,
"i hope he saw me with him.
i hope we never go back."
but it's funny..
'cause i can't quit replaying that shock.
he makes me do these kinds of things.

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this was from october 29.
i just didn't put it in until today.

maybe i'm crazy,
because i'm beginning to feel that way.

what do you title a shitty poem?
"this poem is shit."

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  • Fireworks
    November 22, 2008
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    It's storytime.

    I like storytime.

    Your shit is my treasure.


  • Nuclear
    November 19, 2008

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    Are you back?!

    Rough around the edges, but I know what you can do.
    Also, Justin quit and I don't have his number.
    He's with other Amy we worked with, and I do not like her.
    ...times change.

    Please keep posting?