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Mister

Mister,
I see the way you look at her
Mister
Even though she isn't my sister
I see the way you look at her
With such love in your eyes
You would take her away
Never to let go again because you love her so
Mister,
To love someone is not a wrongdoing
But to love someone who is ten
When you are 29?
Mister,
That is a federal crime

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Title: Mister

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  • Dead Hair
    December 16, 2008

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    Simple and to the point, just like my hatred/fear for this particular man.
    And you can't deny it, I mean come on, the Facebook group says it all .