OverJoyed!

Treading beneath a still ocean
in suspended motion,
we hold hands in tranquil bliss

As sweet kisses release life
saving bubbles of love,
from your lips to mine

Undaunted by a massive plain
of infinite liquid,
that perserves our romantic
interludes of ecstacy

We're sheltered in a realm
of endless possibilities,
whispering mysteries that
keeps us safe

A contest entry

shuttled into oblivion by Melissa Gayle. 1000 points, ended December 2, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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By me, right now

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Melissa Gayle
December 2, 2008

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Its a sweet piece, but I have to be honest and say that it didn't grab me completely.

I would have liked a bit more to it.

Thank you for your entry.
Clovis...Curious
November 19, 2008

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Excellent
A really fine write, and tribute to relationships. You've expressed yourself quite well. Thanks for sharing this one with us.
georgie
November 18, 2008

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a truly beautiful piece... wow! your wording is gorgeous, the flow is great and its truly the ultimate in romance... well written,
hugs,
georgie,
xxx
jaiadoretu.
November 18, 2008
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Wow, deep, and seems pretty sincere. Bravo