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I Can't Make It Stop

My dreams…..filled with things I wish…
I lie in bed….
As my heart cries out with sadness…

A young woman who hopes the one she loves would just hold her
Stretching, but out of reach….
I feel the weight of the world on my shoulders….

Misery, misery…seems to my best friend
Hurt, deceit, lies…..
And a broken heart that hard to mend…..

A slow fall downhill…I’m beginning to go….
I keep hearing it’s gonna be ok…
But that’s not beginning to show…

Is it wrong to feel the way I do?
My eyes well up with tears…
Emotions run…as I think of loosing you…

A glance at the mirror….a broken sight
But I’m not the only one hurting….
Does that make it not right????

When I wasn’t paying attention…look at what I came to  find
My heart begins to race
Confusion plagues my mind

You’ve only seen a glimpse of the pain that my heart once bore….
I’d give you everything….
But everything I have is already yours…

I can’t help how I feel…. I can’t let these feelings drop…
My mind tells me otherwise….
But my heart won’t let me stop….

I lie in bed thinking about this all…
My pillow’s soaked…my heart aches..
And my tears continue to fall………

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  • Whispers of Hope
    November 24, 2008

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    WOw this is so deep so emotional wow truely moving! What a great write your rythem is so perfect and it flows together so nicely! Great job!!


  • Eternal-Dreamer
    November 23, 2008
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    You’ve only seen a glimpse of the pain that my heart once bore….
    I’d give you everything….
    But everything I have is already yours…


    this a very emotional poem the feeling and the thought that you put in to it are very good the way that you expressed yourself is wonderful


  • Gafa
    November 19, 2008

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    awesome write,

    a really emotional and beautiful write

    I can’t help how I feel…. I can’t let these feelings drop…
    My mind tells me otherwise….
    But my heart won’t let me stop…"

    these lines really sum up how we often find ourselves feeling about people and things - amazingly captured!