Never loved you,
Not even once.
Did you think my words,
Really meant anything?
I hate the way you bite your lip,
When you’re deep in thought.
I hate it when you look at me,
And a smile lights your face.
You’re much too cheerful,
You care too much,
And never think before you act.
I really do hate that.
I hate those faces that you make,
When you think there’s no one near.
I hate the way you’d give up all,
Just to be with me.
I waited for that look,
To enter in your eyes,
The look of sweet devotion,
So I could tear it all apart.
You’re such a hindrance,
You cramp my style,
So I thought up a good way,
To make you stay away.
Just say what I was thinking,
The cold and bitter truth,
I’m glad it’s working well,
I hope you don’t come back.
That’s right, I played you,
You fell so hard.
I won the bet,
I told them all.
I revealed your love,
Pushed you away,
Because I had no interest,
In what you had to say.
At least that’s what I said,
When I saw your hollow face,
Knowing that you’re better off,
Without me by your side.
Now I’ve lost my light,
My reason for life,
My souls so dead and empty,
All because I hurt you.
But no more,
This marks the end,
Go find another,
Someone who'll protect you.
But now I wonder why,
It is I let you go,
With the hope of saving,
When I’ve hurt you more.
It’s for the best,
You don’t need me,
Or so I thought,
When I spoke,
But what if I was wrong?
Author notes
I did Option 3.
I go by colie online, and I love playing violin and, really, I'm a hopeless romantic. Shh, don't tell anyone 
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omgosh! this was sooo harsh!!! its eeevil. anyhoo... you wrote this very well though. it started out to be very harsh and pretty "straight-to-yuor-face" but your last line changed it. it ended with a sad note. keep penning
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I loved it!
It was so venimous. You could feel the words spat out and you can imagine the scene in your head. It's just evil at the start. But then when you put about what you did it for it was sweet. Just remember if someone loves you enough to stay with you then your good for them. Good luck in the contest. xoxo -
Well Colie!!!! That was HARSH!!!!!!! Your lucky Josh Groban just came on!!!! :-P, lol, to be honest, its not your best. But even so it was still a good write. *walks a way singing "Sooooo she danceeeesss, in and out of the crowd, like a glance. This romance is..." lol, well you know it Im sure :-P*
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You can call me Nichole. Colie sounds weird coming from you
This one isn't my favourite either. I couldn't think of a lot of things to put, so I feel like I kind of just threw it together =/
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