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Stable

The earth shakes, and the sky trembles,
Yet you are stable.
Buildings fall, and planes crash,
yet you are stable.
The oceans roar, and then there are wars,
yet you are stable.
In my world,
you are the earth and the sky,
the oceans and the peace
yet you are stable

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  • LunaAmara
    November 24, 2008
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    fantastic--i really love this--
    stability is always important
    good luck


  • RanaeS
    November 19, 2008
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    OPTION

    numero uno, #1