Absurd old crow don’t peck at my face
without one I’d be a disgrace.
Instead sing a joyous tune
of a cool afternoon.
Remembering me,
up by the tree,
waiting for
even
score.
In a list
A contest entry
- Forms, Forms and More Forms Nonet Contest by ShelleyA.
1800 points, ended November 19, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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lol good one
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How clever Kim
Aesthetics are perfect until I get to your ( 1 ) syll L
Meter is nice.....rhyme is sweet.....storyline is adoreable....thank you for coming out to support this contest.....god luck & God blesss you,
.....your score shall be sent to your Host,
Bear ~
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Thank you! I know. That last word was tough :-/
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Working your chosen words into your Forms aethetics are most important and part of your Challenge.....you did really well nonetheless
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Thanks, Bear. You're a doll.
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A good write and interpretation of the picture prompt. A skillfully crafted nonet. Nice humor. Good imagery, flow, rhyme and tone. Good descriptives. Good depth of feeling. Very nice meter. Good word choice and assonance, nice alliteration. Thank you for your entry.
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About me? hahahah I liked it. Great poem.
Mike
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hmmmmm gives one pause to think
I love the graphic.
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:)
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