Who I am and who I was,
Are two different things.
No longer am I a desperate, sad, lonely, heartbroken person.
The OLD me is in the past,
The NEW me is in the future,
And i've got my hands stretched towards it,
Just let the rain,
Wash away the old skin,
The old memories,
And the old pain.
Watch me leave behind the tears,
And the broken smiles.
Watch me become something you never thought i could be.
Watch me do the impossible,
I know I can do it,
'Cause "I no longer care who I was before I became who I am,
I am myself,
And that is all I need."
Author notes
"Ergo Proxy" Quote number 5.
xrain dancerx/Tay/Tess/Dark Enchantress.
Hey Love. I'm srry if this wasnt exactly what you were looking for. I just wrote down what came to mind. Kinda having writers block.
LOVE YA! bye!
A contest entry
- Options, Quotes. by LoveDeprived.
700 points, ended December 1, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This is beautiful Tay!
I love how you spaced it out it makes it pop more
Good luck Girlie
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thanks for entering! this is actually quite short but well done, precise, and impactful, creating an imagery that someone is watching you grow, and prove that person wrong, that you have moved on.
"Just let the rain,
Wash away the old skin"
I can just keep going on saying that!.. and wise use of qoute, not the beggining, not the middle, but used in the most important part, the ending, which is what mostly matters..
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We all need a fresh start now and again. Good luck in the contest.
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thanx tyty. srry for being a bitch. love ya. ull always be my whore
p.s. never agree that ur a slut 'cause u dont do nuttin for free!
*hugs* tess.
~Dark Enchantress.
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