the moon,
the sun,
the stars,and
all the empty spaces in between...
or outer space
the moon is bright at night with its friends
the sun, glows with warmth all alone
the stars comfert each other and the moon
then the planets came, all 9 of them
they comferted and befriended the sun
but the sun's best friend was the Earth
that's why it's closer to us
then on that sad day they said pluto...
wasn't a planet any more and was banashed from the
solar system forever and this is why we have winter every year
in rememberance of pluto
Author notes
This is my story of what happened.
A contest entry
- BEAUTIFUL IMAGERY by Rhythm Child.
550 points, ended November 19, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - STARLIGHT by Rhythm Child.
440 points, ended December 18, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what did you think?
Comments
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A great entry
thanks for taking part, wishing you luck would be an insult to your talent
so take care
message me for anything
Billy (Rhythm Child -
Great job...wonderful piece...good luck in the contest
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"then the planets came, all 9 of them
they comforted and befriended the sun"
This piece was amazing little poet. You have an incredible future in writing.
Carrie
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Tears
thanks, you guys are the best
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