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Celestial Scales

             
Outside,

The scales of east
                          and west begin to move,

as gravity shifts
                        it’s weight.

Sun rises,
            sun sets

Moon,
                      Surfeits,
                and
    starves

smiling in Full view
          for all to see its engorged state.


The clouds,
                          Flow,
                  and
            ebb

as earth breaths
        beneath.

While sky changes masks,
    to Season the mood
      for eyes
        that behold
          their celestial feast. 

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  • Rhythm Child
    November 19, 2008

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    A great entry
    thanks for taking part, wishing you luck would be an insult to your talent so take care

    message me for anything
    Billy (Rhythm Child