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Sun

Over the horizon the sun peeks,
The silence is shattered by the colors it speaks.
A moment in time suspended in space,
The light overtakes the darkness erased.
How many words are spoken without a sound,
No greater a story has ever been found.
Nature tells its tale on the wings of tomorrow,
Repeating the story with time it will borrow.
The light with its awesome power,
Changing always with each passing hour.
There are those who believe it holds magic in its light,
Because for a moment it holds back the night.
But with  its bright shine I see,
A reflection of God smiling down on me.

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I wrote this while camping up by Duluth, MN. watching the sunset.

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  • Jesann gold member
    November 19, 2008
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    Very beautiful !!!
    Great imagery...rhyme and flow.
    Well done.


  • Rhythm Child
    November 19, 2008

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    A great entry
    thanks for taking part, wishing you luck would be an insult to your talent so take care

    message me for anything
    Billy (Rhythm Child)


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 18, 2008

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    "A reflection of God smiling down on me." - great piece...love this line especially