she leaves me though shes strong
her smile got me through the storm
a little older than me
so she lends an ear to me
how can this be my best friend
and she knows all of me,
she looks at me and tells me everything is ok
not to worry
and dont be afraid
she stood trough the tough times
standing tall by my side
conforting me
she knows how to make me laugh
she deserves more than what people say
she always stayed true to her
and all the while been there for so many more,
part of my crew
she holds us all down
like the morning sunshine
untill the night
she dawns on new things
and shares in delight
even when times are hard
she manages to fight
A contest entry
- My Best Friend by xXGoddessofPainXx.
620 points, ended November 25, 2008, 15 entries
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This is a beautiful poem.. I like the free write poetry as it conveys a message but in a different way.. I think your piece is great.. Only one error which is line 10, where you have written "she stood trough the tough times"
you have written 'trough instead of through' Thats all
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