He said as he walked out the door...
I just wanted to make you smile
just wanted to make you laugh
I should have told you I had to leave
and wasn’t coming back
I never imagined you’d fall in love
even though I treated you like gold
never knew you’d cling so tight
since your hands were always so cold
liar…
He wanted to make me smile
wanted to make me laugh
because he wanted lustful leisure
without reason to come back
He knew I’d fall in love
that was what he’d planned
because only a fool in love
would forgive a heartless man
Author notes
Ok, its not very funny, but it was a lesson well learned.
A contest entry
- Excuses, Excuses, Excuses, WHATCHA GOT SOBER OR OTHERWISE by Disturbed Prodigy.
7000 points, ended December 5, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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I am sorry to hear that you had to go through that. But I hope you learned something from your experiences with this "heartless man"
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you want me to hunt him down for you, i will do it, i know people, who know people that know people, but life comes with lessons we all have to learn, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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ouch! that's one of those ....ewwww..damn that hurt
excuses!
written very lovely...like the style and structure you chose!
well done!
thankyou for your entry!
ears/Seattle
and i agree...this type of man...is truly the most
dangerous of creatures that crawls on their bellies of
dismal excuses!
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These type of lessons tend to last a lifetime dear. Good luck in the contest.
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