You have stepped here
for I can smell you
I can sense your planting flowers.
You once slept here
I can still feel you
as your muse flows through my veins.
You have said here
and I can hear you
your laughter lingers in the air.
You once fled here
my I can taste you
it's sweetness gathers by my side.
Do my eyes deceive me
or can I see your ghost
lingering with a different name?
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Comments
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wow nice. I like it it was short but sweet. keep on writing my friend!
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oh my goodness, this is amazing, stunning
So great, wow It's just the right length, and every line you've written fits perfectly in it's place, it's clear and easy to understand but not just telling us something in a boring kind of way. The way you've placed your words within each line, and each line within each stanza and each stanza within the poem, is perfect! 
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