the day my grandmama died was hard but not as hard when i found out my best friend was murder...it took alot not too cry but some how i shead a tear everyday for him...every morning waking up i hear his voice in the back of my mind...check my fone for that one text sayin good morning mamii...but it only comes to mind when i reliaze that he aint never commin back...i stay up late waitin for his good night text but instead i can only hear him say good night mamii i love you too and im on my way to do this mission call u in the morning...man i miss how we talked about each others night or if i had i problems with ol dude hell stay up late dissin his girl to talk to me and give me advice and tellin me everything going to be okay....i give anything to see his face once more...homeboy was a part of me...and i lost that half of me when he had to go...i walk around like all is good but only hide what im feelin on the inside wit a fake smile to cover a pain thats so deep down n under...find it so hard to uncover...only trusted one person and that person is gone forever...but never forgotten...and i pray to the father that he can help me let him go....
A contest entry
- Contest- Symbiosis by g r e y i s m.
875 points, ended December 20, 2008, 19 entries
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I am sorry for your loss, and appreciate that you took the time to enter. However, this entry does not fit the contest rules.
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Hello Raflores,
I am sorry that you have to feel this pain. Losing someone you love is hard enough, but losing someone you love at the hands of someone else has got to be 100% worse.
I would usually comment on spelling, form, structure, etc, but I dont think this needs any of that.. its straight from the heart... it is a raw piece and sometimes... our writing is better left the way it felt in our heart....
My prayers are with you that your heart can heal.
Criss
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