Chained to the moon, fallen from the stars
Caught in a revolution of another time.
The forgotten scream, the immortal dream,
When nothing is as it once seemed.
Moon swept sighs crawling through my eyes,
Is this where disaster lies?
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this is a really great start, it really has some strong imagery already, and is very well written, i really like the last line, and think it work really well as the end even when you finish it up, great start
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