Take my hand and come with me
To leave this world for eternity!
To leave behind this world of hate
To enter a world that we shall create!
Take my hand and fly with me
We can fly away and forget
These worldly bounderies!
We can leave and not care who sees
Spread our arms and fly high over the seas!
Take my hand and fly away with me
Dont worry about those who disagree!
For if we fly away together
They could never bring us down cause we'll be as light as feathers!
Author notes
Option #2
Cicada
ummm yea i dont this is very good but it was worth the try anyway =D
A contest entry
- Not sure a title! But come anyway! by Lost in a Dreamstar.
448 points, ended November 25, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
its different =)
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i love reading your work, its almost like its ffloating around me. great write, wonderful imagery!
~jacklyn
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thanks love
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Good Job
The imagery and rhyme in this poem are great, i enjoyed reading this.
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Uplifting poem. I like the images of freedom and ease.
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thank you
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Awesome!
I really enjoy this write!! It has great strength and courage! Beautifully written
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I loved it! Great!
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