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Man

Open
your love within
my sweet smelling pleasure
mound awaits your joy stick to cum
inside.


Yvonne J. Griffin
11/18/08 (4/10/05)

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  • GloriousGift
    February 11

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    WOW, really surprised, coz me & all the people I know have this same phase as you, Which is Great , there's something in the air, lol

    & You just penned it wonderfully, I love it.
    Thanks alot for sharing

    GloriousGift
    Heba

  • Cwm
    November 23, 2008

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    um wow! Juicy, steamy, hawt, hawt, and hawt! LOL... you having this moments again I see Ms... like them and they in poetic fashion at that... well done.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    November 19, 2008

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    Whoa,

    Something coming over you or what? Nevermind, don't answer that. Nice to be surprised once in awhile, I like that! Pen on sweet soul! Peace, Timothy