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Morbid deed and devils seed

 

 

A wicked time in history

hushly whispered

and fearfully unspoken.

Glares damnations warnings.

 

For morbid greed and devils seed

flowed through out the kingdom.

The belly of Satans laughter

bled gluttony and pride.

 

Feasting upon Gods children,

as reward and virgin bride.

Sacrifice and castration 

of innocent male childs.

 

The holy book of knowledge

hidden from all mankind,

angered the almighty

Commanders of Heaven.

 

'Tis best to close your eyes,

not dare to look upon this sight.

Lest you lay down n' slumber,

unable to awaken, victimized.

 

Hear not the merciless

and pitiful screams of night.

Vile darkness cannot hide

justice swords of eternal light.

 

Captured within each stone

the ashes of damnations pride.

Suffocating forever the echoed breath

of Satans laughter.

 

Dear child, look away,

less you find yourself

lost in their decay.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

contest prompt: picture of the irish castle...

Medieval history has a lot to teach about why...we have important...boundaries in our lives,
lest we forget how horrifying mankind's cruelty can be..without accountability.
I hope you liked it!

(the old testaments is filled with gruesome battles, between that and medievel history
i had vivid nightmares that night)

picture credit above: talented artistry of Do_You_Seek_the_Castle__by_RedAnalysis
below picture: pikey666@glittergraphics.com

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  • Angelflower
    December 3, 2008

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    This was really beyond amazing. I believe that I am at a loss for words. you truly reached in deep and brought something out that I didn't really see, but I love it. Thank you very much for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.

    Angel


  • KayJay
    November 26, 2008

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    Simply fantastic... What a tale, part myth, part history, all engrossing... I love the feel of this, like opening the pages of an ancient tome and reading the lore of the past... I think you've struck the perfect balance of story telling and morality...
    Great write - pure and simple.
    Ken


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    November 24, 2008

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    Beautifully Dark

    Dark, dark, dark. I loved it. The imagery and atmophere all combined to make this a very good piece of dark writing indeed. Love the emotion behind this too. I found this cold...and dark. My type of reading material {hehehe}. Well done indeed my sister.


  • Wolfdog silver member
    November 24, 2008

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    Superb plus

    A very fine write, indeed. You expressed your thoughts with great clarity. Thanks for sharing this one with us.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 20, 2008

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    You give us heed to our past, our origins in our faith, and what was done to do away with a people, a history of those who fear God and serve Him, and it can happen again...You challenge us with your perceptive view and imagination on the photo prompt to look backwards, and to look into the present and future to value our faith, and be willing to make a committment to it....Creative, thought provoking write...Excellent scribing!


  • badnovocaine
    November 18, 2008

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    All I have to say is WOW, this was an incredibly good write you have here. It kind of had an epic feel to it if you don't mind me saying, that's a good thing because it just makes me feel that this write had lots of character and personality in this. And I loved both pictures, especially the second one was really dark.
    Well done here.

    'Tis best to close your eyes,
    not dare to look upon this sight.
    Lest you lay down to slumber,
    unable to awaken, victimized.
    ----------
    I loved this part


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 18, 2008

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    i have to say i knew you were a great poem here, wonderfully done, i mean really this is something. i mean this was creepy and weird but it was good, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • SiyanaSilverMist
    November 18, 2008

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    Delightful

    'Tis best to close your eyes,

    not dare to look upon this sight.

    Lest you lay down to slumber,

    unable to awaken, victimized.


    This part, to me was my favorite


  • Endeavor gold member
    November 18, 2008

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    Very Good

    Hear not the merciless
    and pitiful screams of night.
    For darkness cannot hide
    justice swords of eternal light.

    Interesting rendering in Old English Verse

    Well done

    Rick

  • Sweetest-Maleficia
    November 18, 2008
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    damn this is sick


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    November 18, 2008

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    God verses Devil, a so popular theme in christian circles
    Darkness and light again something to fear
    I say fear none other but your self, you know when you have taken a wrong step
    There is a thing in us called conscience to guide us
    There is no god about and certainly no Satan
    We have created them and we pay for our doing so the price
    Religion is a mischief, leading the sinners to the gallows, their doctrines a lie and a crime to humanity
    If you want to see a god or a devil look in the mirror
    On the other hand you may see a chicken hutching golden eggs, that blow up and make a mess, like the uranium bombs that fell in Yugoslavia and polluted the Adriatic sea, and all these were done in the name of religion, led by the so faithful and humble ding dong Bush the oil man, after he prayed to god for guidance
    What a wonderful god.

    Of course these have nothing to do with you so nice write

    Just gave me the oportunity to let off steam

     

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