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With Modesty I Grant Her

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The mammoth task that my ambitions view,
Shall intercept with reason why I care
To change this woman from the god I knew
Becomes the pedestal, that none compare.

I see her shape and form delight the day,
My having known her finds I care this much
A complimentary distance can portray;
That this is not illusion hence the touch.

She signals that elusiveness as blessed,
That modesty before it, serves our souls
With everything that nature has to test
Provides us with problem solving goals.

Heaven lit when words from her were spoke,
Presenting us with merchandise to fill,
The universe, and that's where gods provoke
A strength that carries us, far well.., until.

And if I'm asked, "Do you believe in god?"
With shyness should I say, she is unknown,
yet follows every footprint I have trod
Providing us the depth, now what we own.

 

Author notes

Happiness is the warm goodness squirmy feeling I get in the pit of my stomach when my mind stumbles over a thought about him.

Write about it.
make me feel that feeling.

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  • Vickie Rosa
    June 18

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    WISE WORDS

    You have done it again,Heaven lit when the words from her were spoke, lovely just lovely. Standing novation my friend, how much more can I say


  • Maybe Anastasia
    December 10, 2008
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    Very nice. not quite for me but I did like it. good job

  • poets whisper silver member
    November 18, 2008

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    where do beautiful thoughts like this come from?  it is sigh inducing poetry at it's most romantic. Any woman that reads it will be the better for it and I for one am bookmarking it.


  • Amera gold member
    November 18, 2008
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    You left an amazing comment on one of my poems so I just had to come here and see who you are. I'm glad I did! This is a wonderful Quatrain with beautiful rhyme and meter. The appreciation and passion you express toward women is evident and very attractive.

    Love,
    Amera♥