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Ignorant Corruption

I wake up to your smiling face
Love holds us in a sweet embrace
The moment couldn’t be more pure
To this disease there is no cure
But I accept it just the same
For this disease, I know its name

This disease so deceptive and divine
Corrupts me in a way benign
I go with joy and ignorance too
My senses blinded by only you
Until at last I finally stir
To find my world has become a blur

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  • MeganDanielleJonas
    November 25, 2008
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    love is a disease. true story!! im a rebel..commenting my own poem!!!


  • McRae by nature
    November 18, 2008
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    This piece is really amazing. I love the power in each line.

    Carrie


  • WretchedLove
    November 18, 2008

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    WOW! I LOVED this. Not even kidding. Do you mind if i use this as a card write for my boyfriend? If not I understand, I'll be sure to sign it with your name, not mine. I could never take responsibility for something so wonderful.