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bLISSFUL eNDING

The words they whisper in my ear
    Cut my heart like a million fragments of broken glass.
Constant put-downs.
  Constant let-downs.
I will never fit in.
Left behind and forgotten,
    I
        AM
                  WORTHLESS.
Sweet, sweet razor blade
                                      your slice is so beautiful...
The only cure for my depression.
The only way...
To escape this fate of horridness.
This broken feeling in my soul weighs me down
    I
          AM
                  NOTHING.
Mascara stained pillows
Weeping myself into a restless slumber.
    Sweet, sweet razor blade-
I thank you for this blissful ending.

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WAS IT ENOUGH TO BRING TEARS TO YOUR EYES????????????

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  • one-broken-heart
    March 3

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    Yes.

    Yes...it was enough to bring tears to my eyes...that is...if I were to have tears left....but I have a new song/poem for you that everyone needs to read....


    I love Kristy, yes I do
    I love Kristy
    F*ck with her, I'll kill you!!!


  • McRae by nature
    November 18, 2008

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    This is so depressing. I was here once years ago, it does get better, but that means nothing really. Very strong piece.

    Carrie


  • Devilish Temptation
    November 18, 2008
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    WOW This is Intensely written my friend this is beyond the word powerful. It's so sad and full of raw pain. I can relate nearly everyday of my life I wouldn't wish self hatred on my worst enemy. Very well written poem.

    Yes it surely brought tears to my eyes actually did more than that it made me cry because thats how I feel and you captured my heart

    Take care *rose