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Madonna of the Long Neck

Why Parmigianino painted her neck like a swan's,
oil upon wood, right foot thrust at the viewer
was to innovate, keep ahead of his time.
It was necessary to paint the Madonna
with Jesus a toddler, angels quite bright
and St Jerome, shrunken, head turned away,
reading from some ancient scroll because
it was the expected thing.

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For, who would look at any young Miriam or Mary
with child upon lap and cherubic children adoring?
Who would stretch the Madonna on a rack, for beauty?
Who would seat her and unseat her in the one setting
and shave the young Messiah's head? Well, a mannerist.
True, the Virgin is swathed in luxurious robes in blue,
precious blue, off-the-shoulder shawl, with four angels,
dwarfed in their cheery little Heaven.

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And what did God think of the creation when his artist,
no doubt pleased, had finished and washed his hands?
As with the eternal in all things, we have not a clue.
Perhaps Christ said to St Jerome:
Methinks Parmagianino
placed you in perspective but look where he placed me,
an elongated babe slipping from a mother's knee!
Yet,
those tall Attic pillars of marble do reach towards glory.
And what is Mary thinking? A choice question.

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Stealing a thought from Polonius: If this be madness,
there is method in it.
Reaching for grace, the artist finds
elegance in gracefulness and runs with it for dear life
across his wooden block. Not really. He knew the road
he was taking,
the one less travelled by
and that unorthodoxy has made a world of difference;
non-classical naturalness, with head, neck and breasts
to swoon for. 

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When I squint at Modern Art in galleries today
I know Parmigianino was not so very far away.

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  • waydownuponjoy
    November 21, 2008

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    A good rendering ...

    of an artistic masterpiece and one that showed astuteness for details that I would have overlooked had you not shared them. You prosey poem had me glancing back to the painting, for I would have never spent so much time with it. It is with other's eyes that we become aware of details and perhaps a finer appreciation for fine? art. Thank you for sharing! jy


  • MargaretG
    November 18, 2008

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    a friendly art lesson

    Certainly I would not be able to say so much in such an interesting way about this painting, which startlingly departs from earlier iconography. I have talked with my mother, who is an artist, about the strange proportions of these Renaissance Christ babies, whose size and apparent age are at odds. The perspective on Mary is also exaggerated in the lower half. Was it to push the envelope of art, an iconoclasm? Very memorable if it was.
    I like the style, good luck.


    • Lyndon gold member
      November 19, 2008
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      Thank you, Margaret.

      Yes, I agree. The envelope is pushed. Actually, I feel that Raphael's "Transfiguration" was a watershed, painted in 1517, incompletely by him. It has two centres of high interest: the wonderful boy in the foreground and Christ with the two prophets in the bright, cloudy background with much tension of disciples in between. It is Mannerist work as well as looking back to classicism of Leonardo. In fact, there is a looking forward even to the Baroque.

      Notice how Mary's right foot pokes out of the painting in my subject.

      Thank you again.


  • McRae by nature
    November 18, 2008

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    This was nothing short of fantastic. I love the reference to Hamlet my favorite Shakespearian play.

    And also...
    "elongated babe slipping from a mother's knee" how true. The babe does look quite bizarre, and love the reference to the bald head. He definitely looked to old to still be hairless. All in all, this piece had a bit of humor and a lot of good questions, questions that can not really be answered any more. It will be a mystery forever Great write.

    Carrie

    • Lyndon gold member
      November 18, 2008
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      Carrie

      Thank you very much. It has been written on the spot and then I searched for the painting. It is 3:30 am in Australia and I must hit the sack. I'll place the link to the print of the painting up later today.

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