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the real friend...

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Oh God

I am appreciative to them
who double-crossed
making me pathetic by their plays

denying me the love
and the cover of their crown

it was then only,
I left to
make a cry for your relief
opting you as the real friend

Oh God...

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"The secret of life is to appreciate the pleasure of being terribly, terribly deceived."

- Oscar Wilde

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  • eclairluv
    September 12

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    For everybody...

    I think everyone on this planet has been deceived in one way or another and this poem shows hows that is very true! To be "appreciative to them" is all you need! Very, very enlightening and I liked the movement to the end towards "Him."

  • Tivoli
    January 4

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    To be honest I'm dont really understand this.
    'I am appreciative to them/who double-crossed...'
    Who are they?

    Apart from this I do like the elegant way in which you have described the turning to god in times of need and the search for faith.

    Great write.

    Rob

  • Judith Chandler
    December 13, 2008

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    They were like Job Comforters though that is probably not an exact comparison. You reacted in a very positive way and didn't let their cruelty affect you.


  • Simply Olivia
    November 19, 2008
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    "opting you as
    the real friend" - Beautiful!


  • rhondasail
    November 18, 2008

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    Oscar Wilde would be impressed, I certainly am!....Strong language directly spoken, with the perfect eye to the 'sky'...Love it. Peace and best wishes in the contest. Rhonda


  • Hikari Lady
    November 18, 2008

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    Indeed, he's the best friend one can ever get, he listens, meand, helps, aid, assist and gives more than anyone could ever give.
    You've penned a wonderful write here, my friend. Just lovely and warm. Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest.

    ~Noor


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    November 18, 2008

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    loved it you really did a very great job expressing the seret of life and yu used the best example good luck in the contest


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    November 18, 2008

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    acceptance is the key to joy
    we can not control others, but we can control ourselves.

    beautifully profound, a pleasure to read
    God bless you my friend...


  • lovesky
    November 18, 2008
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    There is a lot of truth to this, well done!

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