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Soul Submission

One look into your eyes
paralyzes my tongue
Speechless I tremble
with both joy and fear
You hold a power over me
controling me like no other ever could
Drawing love straight from my soul
into your heart
Bound completely
for your bidding
Whole inside myself
for the first time
Surrendering my soul
to only you
I kneel and submit
to only you my queen
Forever bound
here for your bidding
Giving all of myself to you
beginning with my soul

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Second Prompt~When your heart steals my tongue

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  • Angelflower
    December 11, 2008

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    A very sweet and moving write.. A lovely take on the prompt thank you very much for sharing. Best of luck


    Angel


    • buffsab99
      December 11, 2008
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      Thank You

      Thank you, a welcome change from the dark writes lately