Nightly I dream
neath the full moon
shrouded the mist of darken desires
Raven beauty found
chilled of her vixen's gaze
into my very soul
Holding fast her beating heart
in vigil quest
of one deemed worthy
her pentagrams calling
Author notes
"I believe in the unknown"
I have always been interested in anything from UFO's ,to ghost hunting,witch's demons ect., with a small group of friends I've taken interest in paranormal research.
Yes I hunt ghost when work permits. I'm also learning to meditate and doing some Chakra research.
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt - Witchcraft theme... by Passionate Phoenix.
550 points, ended December 2, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nice. Spooky and scary as it should be.
Love your work.
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Again thanks for the time you've invested.....
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excellent~
You did a wonderful job with this pic prompt
Great reading and imagery as well
Best of luck in the contest
A winner in my book
Hugs
Susan~~~
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wow what an entry, I really like this piece - it's bursting with imagery. I particularly like the line "raven beauty found"
nice write, well done and good luck xx -
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Thank you for the chance to muse and for your time invested in reading and commenting on my ramblings.....
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Great write Rick. Interesting too! But I myself don't want to hunt any ghost, I'll just be under the bed hehe
Good luck my friend.
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Thank Linda for all your support. This was a quick write on my one day off this week. Sorry to have missed you, I'm tring to plan a little ghost hunt here in Louisville with some new friends if I can get off work one night. Found out about a Witch's Cemetery about 3 hours drive from Louisville......
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Well done
I liked this poem, interesting... but what I can't decide is if the wording was done on purpose or accidentally. EG. shrouded BY the mist of darkened desires. Chilled by her vixens gaze.?? Don't know if you meant those to be like that. Either way great write. Keep ghost busting
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Let the wording take you where you may wish to go....we all heed to the callings from within (eg our own souls) either our dreams... or our nightmares. Glad that you did find some enjoyment in the read and I thank you for your time in reading and commenting.
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