I loved you
I thought you loved me
then you had sex with her
now you hate me
you crushed on me forever
now it can not be
good bye to love
goodbye to me!
deep down inside
there is a question I want to ask you
do you love her as much as you
loved me
I see you every day
with some one new
is it because you found no one like me
that meant as much to you?
I know you will never find someone like me
I am confused I thought you loved me?
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415 points, ended December 14, 2008, 29 entries
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I'm sorry that you had someone cheat on you it hurts like hell. I am here if need to talk. Sometimes we think someone cares and thinks alot of us and then they hurt you.
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Your poem illustrates the confusion of love, and loving, and being loved. It doesn't get any easier! Well done.
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the 1st 3 lines made me LOL
but then it got good.... REALLY GOOD
it think they made me laugh just cuz i read them out of context. its a great write -
awww
i like. it's always confusing when we dont understand the reasoning behind actions, especially when those actions hurt us.
its a pedantic thing but this font colour is really hard to read so you might want to consider changing it.
a very heartfelt write
kitch x -
"deep down inside
there is a question i want to ask you
do you love her as much as you
loved me" - Oh, so painful.
I think that's the question most of us want to ask in this situation. Sometimes we never get the answer, I hope you do.
Great write.
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