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half reveal

Missing image

blood letting over limbs
she is mystery unknown

elegantly waving hand
feelings warm in cold
filling their hearts
showing only half
deftly concealing
other side
movements oozing juices

 she leans over audience
provoking wild guess
goes near them
swetly singing

calling them
gently

Author notes

Seduce my mind, ensnare my heart, capture my soul, and my body is yours completely...Unknown


Picture credited to: http://gabatinie.deviantart.com/art/Love-22189965

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  • Hikari Lady
    November 18, 2008

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    Thanks for entering but this is not in the shape I wanted (Hour glass) Try to revise it before the closing time.