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snowflakes * *
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a new dress *
for naked branches
Author notes
modern haiku
In a list
A contest entry
- Haiku v Haiku by Titus.
2400 points, ended November 30, 2008, 4 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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How cute! I love how you wrote this one. The little extra visual is like a cherry on top. Or, in my case, a blueberry (I'm not so fond of cherries).
I don't like winter, but I must say, the trees sure are beautiful after a fresh snow. You've captured this wonderful moment so well. You truly have a way with haiku.
Congratulations on the trophy!
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I was bursting with creativity that day lol
to me its golden
Im still learning to express myself in haiku/senryu
thanks for commenting and applause -
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We're all "still learning" - but you're definitely further along than me.
I also took a bit of inspiration from you, and have become more experimental in my visual depiction of my haiku.
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be careful of creative exibitions...and presentation..i have had many people knock me down because of my and graphics and line placements...it could hurt you in a competition..lol
just a warning! to strick so called rules...lol
I dont care if I break them, its my style
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Point taken; thanks for the warning. I'll be more careful in contests, especially if I know I'm facing a strict judge.
And hey, even Basho wrote the occasional two-line haiku, so why not?
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well done, you've reached the second round
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the visuals in this look like a quick journey to the town and Primark I'd suppose. Snow here is not going to stop you,
nice work.
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Well this is a unique new style! And a lovely contructed one I must say.
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I love this one...
It is so creative and made me smile...
what a wonderful look at winter...
love the snowflakes...
Beautiful once again...
Love,
mystic
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your poems are the reason i hug my computer
Love, Lane
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awwwwwe i love that thought...ill bet it feels warm too...
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Very nice. Good luck in the contest and happy trails
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thanks dave
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wonderful way to look at winter - very creative, and the spacing is something you are doing so well - asterisks - something different!
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tanks erika ies for you
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see I would never thought of it that way,
thanks because this morning our trees were all dressed in white, all I could think abot is shoveling.
glass half full
beautiful and uplifting
God bless you my friend...
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hope you're wearing boots... and here's a to keep you warm
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Clever... not sure about the asterisks
but the haiku is beautiful...
Ken
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it's a crete ku ... lol
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Oh wow, brilliant - that's a really neat idea with the *
As for the poem - very pretty.
Good luck
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thanks
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