My eyes flash wide transfixed
Nubile form partially clothed
My arms embrace my confusion
The misty chill promotes delusion
Butterflies twitter at my consciousness
What is this I grasp?
Pentagram!
Where am I?
What have I done?
Could it be?
No!
I am a………
Noooooooooo
Author notes
I believe in the unknown and this is really out of my comfort zone but worth a shot. For a contest relating to a picture.
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt - Witchcraft theme... by Passionate Phoenix.
550 points, ended December 2, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I went to see what the picture was but i guess its been removed. I imagine what you are is under a witches spell, used as a pawn in a semi concious state. Very cool! You do a great job of writing this persons confusion as they start to wake up.
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Nice write here. Bet of luck in the contest with it!!
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please re-read the rules - you're missing something
I really liked this, I thought it was quite quirky tbh, and I really quite liked the idea of this woman realising what she is.
Thank for this piece, good luck x
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