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Untamed. (Cinquain)

Untamed
Unshackled too
Wonder what next she'll do
Pleasant scene or hullabaloo
Stirring.

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Prompt.Untamed.

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  • JinSays gold member
    November 30, 2008
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    wonderful.
    love,
    jin


  • katzeyez
    November 19, 2008

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    Very good piece indeed. I think the prompt lends itself, as you have done, to expect the unexpected.
    Thank you and good luck.
    Katz xx

  • Bad Bill
    November 18, 2008

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    I think you've caught the essence of "untamed" in this well-fashioned piece. Good luck in the contest.

    Bill