Soft sighs
Within misty vapours
Of souls breath..
Dreaming
Caught unawares
Thoughts silently recede
To reveal again
The outer form
Of being
Author notes
Photo -My own
A contest entry
- Write me a poem about FOG! by poetrandy.
700 points, ended December 1, 2008, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrite Quickie!! by Mango Memories.
400 points, ended November 24, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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special.
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I realy liked that. The wording was great. well done..
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LOVELY!!!
Oh how I have been alone way out in the woods on misty moring and just let the solitude and calm seep into my heart!
's It is an amazing feeling!
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lovley
congratulations
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Lovely imagery of words reflecting,
the depth of the photographic image.
Both are well crafted
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That photo is extremely eerie, beautiful but very chilling, much like the poem its worded so perfectly yet it has a chilling quality about it
a great write -
Very good!
Good imagery. Good luck in the contest!
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Wow!! Wonderful photograph and the words you have chosen here do it complete justice..Excellent...mal
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Wow. One. The photo is awesome.
Two. I loved this, "Within misty vapours
Of souls breath.."
Winters and fog..love it
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