Can you feel those clouds
Weeping on your window?
Those are my tears my love
Can you hear them flow?
Standing a few feet away
I look after you
It is what I remained
In this world to do
I stayed by you
Until you moved on
When you started laughing
and not holding on
Watching your heart find love
And wedding vows exchanged
Watching you and me
Become more estranged
Your son, he is three now
It's time I moved on
Can you feel those clouds
Weeping on your window?
My final goodbye my love
To Heaven, I must go.
Author notes
http://yamichi.deviantart.com/art/home-86290212
A contest entry
- May I Prompt You? VIII - Ghost by Manda Kathryn.
400 points, ended December 5, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think?
Comments
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What an engaging poem that breaks my heart
Beautifully sad and touching this is a wonderful take on the prompt
♥
Thank You for Your Entry & Best of Luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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wow i gotta tell u girl.. this one was good... i loved the imagery u gave me.. the raw emotions u put into this..and a great take on the prompt..
i really want u to know ur alot better then u think u are .. it was very creative
good luck on the contest
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