The hidden secrets of ones soul
Indeed lie hidden
Unless acted upon.
therefore,
Awaken them...with Desire.
Desire kindles all fires of passion.
and
Whatsoever Desires ye seek
Be it chasing rainbows or the stars above.
One can attain their dreams
And the hidden treasures therein.
so
Awaken this power...
And one day,
Whatever you seek shall be yours.
dragonheart1
Author notes
promt: What is the secret of life?
Along with desire you need belief but desire kindles all belief.
A contest entry
- The Secret of Life by Olivias Violin.
550 points, ended December 6, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thought provoking
I like the idea behind this piece, anything with a positive slant is only to be congratulated. However this does tend to repeat the same message several times and you could tighten up the whole piece for greater effect.
Also don’t underestimate the ability that is also needed to make anything happen, sometimes desire is not always enough. The body may be willing but the flesh weak.
Kat
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Good answer!
Thank you for sharing this poem
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Every day look and read a beautiful poem..your hidden secret of your soul..reveals majestic beauty..keep penning.
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