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Dearest Zenda-Lokki

 

 

You ask for a lover to share,

Your thoughts and writings,

May I be just that one?

 

I do not know so much,

About this little thing,

That everyone calls love.

 

But if you teach me this,

I may turn into one,

Very compassionate lover.

 

So what do you say,

Let us go wild and,

Lets run away together!

 

 

Author notes

Prompt: Zenda-Lokki is looking for a lover or girlfriend

Background I snagged from Alyzeh

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

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Comments

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  • ea silver member
    December 3, 2008

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    All the best to the happy couple.


    • Meroza
      December 3, 2008
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      Thank you, and congrats on your spot as well, it was well deserved.


  • Maxboy gold member
    November 20, 2008

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    Who could resist such a wonderful invitation, but please listen to your bro.

    Wishing you well on everything.


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 19, 2008

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    what a lovely piece...and i love your background...how do you make this part transparent so that you can see the background
    good luck in the contest


  • badnovocaine
    November 18, 2008

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    This poem was very good. I think that it had a sense of freedom to it, especially the last part.
    Well done here, best of luck in the contest, but hopefully you nailed it
    This was a good love poem.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 18, 2008

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    hold on what is this, i need to check this person out as your big bro, i need a background check, do they have any warrants,is everything on them, theirs, things like that, lol, i like this poem and think that you would a make any one a lucky ap lover or girlfriend, but i am still doing the background check


    • Zenda-Lokki gold member
      November 19, 2008
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      What is the background check going to intail lol??


    • Meroza
      November 19, 2008
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      Oh no, don't do anything stupid now bro! *shivers*


  • daviscth silver member
    November 18, 2008

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    Young lady, if you run off this person, don't you dare forget your laptop!!!!!!!!!!
    And above all, don't forget to write to your mama. (That would be me )

    Good luck in the contest dear, I love this.

    • Meroza
      November 18, 2008
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      Haha, I can't go anywhere with out my laptop, it is like oxygen to me! And I'll give you a wink when I start running


  • luna-midnight gold member
    November 18, 2008
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    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
    hehehe, i hope you win!
    i looked at this, but nah...my heart was kidnapped. hahaha
    good luck sissy, love you <3


    • Meroza
      November 18, 2008
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      Naw, no way.
      *hands over your heart*
      Here you have it back sissy ^-^

      • luna-midnight gold member
        November 18, 2008
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        lol. i cant...only the person i gave it to, and who ran away with it, can give it back, and even then he couldnt, for my heart was given with super glue, so he couldnt let go of it..haha...seems instead he hid it, and squashed it.


        lol.

        • Meroza
          November 18, 2008
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          Naaaw Now you make me not wanting to hand out my heart sissy! I hope that boy gets to his senses else I will have to come over and give him a pep talk

          • luna-midnight gold member
            November 18, 2008
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            oh, but he already gae his heart to another, you see

            *sigh*


            haha, you can give your heart, just dont put super glue on it

  • Zenda-Lokki gold member
    November 18, 2008

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    Aaawwww!!

    Such a cutie write xx It has brought the biggest smile etched all over my face xx Thank you so much for this hun xx Its so lovely xx

    Wish I had left the anonymous part out now lol who are you?? lol

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